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When did it all begin
Falling out of indifference
Into something crazy
Into something new

You've sent my world spinning
And neither of us understands
The oceans of confusion
Which begin to surround this land

What is this feeling
I get when I'm with you
I want to wrap up in its warmth
And never return to the chilling dark

I'm tearing
Spinning
My world is…


O, what am I to do
When I look into your eyes
It makes me want to cry
Showing every secret to you

Time is cruel
As is reality
And my world is now…


I cannot say what I mean
For my words are tongue tied
From just a simple kiss
When was the last time

I was as happy as this

Time will tell
As reality shows fantasy
For my world is now upside down


But I believe you would catch me
Before I hit the ground

5/19/04
I think as much as we try to control our emotions things jut happen… but what are they? I'm so impatient it won't help me any. So as much as I'll try to fight it I'll have to see where this ride takes me. Now I'm scared shitless...
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Varyl Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2004
Wow, just wow, this is so awesome, beautiful piece, describes a feeling i know all to well perfectly.

Favorites for jou! :boogie:
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2004
heh thank you hun :)
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minuitserenite Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
wow, i like this. very sweet. have you ever felt like this?

:+fav:
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
well thank you, and also for the +fav
and yes I've felt like this about 95% of my writing is influence my personal events and emotions
thanks again :hug:
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minuitserenite Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
my pleasure. ^_^
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moleking Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2004
I like your writing style, it flows so nicely...
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Zeralot Featured By Owner May 18, 2004
nice one
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner May 18, 2004
thanks :)
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LiteCorpse Featured By Owner May 16, 2004   Writer
Ah~ trust... such a delicate emotion :nod:

:clap:
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner May 17, 2004
heh very true ;)
thank you for all your kind comments :hug:
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jerzchick16 Featured By Owner May 16, 2004   Writer
i like this a lot....it has realism to it and a lot of depth!! :D :+fav:
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner May 16, 2004
thank you for all the kind comments and the +fav :hug:
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jerzchick16 Featured By Owner May 16, 2004   Writer
you're welcome so much...your work is very inspiring!! :D
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner May 16, 2004
:blushes: aww well thanks again
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jerzchick16 Featured By Owner May 16, 2004   Writer
you're much welcome!!
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cinderellacomplex Featured By Owner May 15, 2004
ooh. i like it a lot.

The oceans of confusion
Which begin to surround this land

and

For my words are tongue tied
From just a simple kiss

are my favorite parts
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XxTwilights-AngelxX Featured By Owner May 15, 2004
thank you very much for the comment, glad you like it :nod:
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